Oh my god thank god! I was ready to have a panic attack w/ all the hot, cold, miscommunication, misunderstanding, bullshit. Sigh relief
OH MY GOODNESS.
This story was good but very frustrating to read. Everytime I thought it was going to be ok something else happened. Glad it all worked out in the end though.
"This time she knew that there was a small sliver of a chance that she had missed her period for a reason." no kidding. "It'd been over a week--nine days, five hours and six minutes, to be exact--" aww, poor boy. "She didn't want the shocks to come all at once and overwhelm him." how kind. great job, really.
I have got to say that I am a little underwhelmed by the way this ended. I mean, there has been 18 1/2 chapters of nothing but bad/hard times and then it ends at the news of pregnancy. Wow! I mean, what a great thing to throw in but I feel that there was more to tell of this story. The writing was really good. I was into the story the entire time and then to have it end to abruptly was somewhat of a let down. If only you could write a few more chapters and they actually work on the reconciliation.....