It was okay but the format needed to be fixed and should have been longer but it was good job considering the pressure you were under
eeeeep! formatting's a bit of a mess. a good way to fix it is to open it as an attachment on googlemail as html, right click "view source code", then copy-paste the html into the rlfic edit story site.
On your story, I think a longer story would have allowed for more insight into the characters and their relationship. It was great you were able to participate despite exams!