This was such a fun story to read. You write so cleverly. My favourite line? "Fuck Ross and Rachel. Oh!" She was surprised by the venom in her voice and her hand flew to her lips as she blinked in shock at her words." And what a cute ending! :)
I suck for taking so long to finally review this, but I LOVE IT! I love jealous Logan, and I love that Rory took the job in Providence. (Seriously, her passing up on that job offer is one of the stupidest things in season 7.)
I really love what you did with my prompt and I love the Ross and Rachel comparison. The dreaded "last time" they were together was so bittersweet. And the last part was the perfect ending. They still have their issues, obviously, but they don't matter anymore, because they are together!
Thank you so much for this!
I really enjoyed this story, especially the idea of the ending. And thank goodness they weren't like Ross and Rachel. Logan's much less annoying than Ross and it took them a whole decade to get their act together. LOL
As usual Nicole, you have a knack for writing great stories. Sometimes I get a little nervous since we tend to have some differences of opinion, but I did enjoy your story. I liked that this conflict was a pretty natural one that would happen in this sort of situation, and neither party was completely in the wrong. I am also glad that you had them work on their earlier difficulties to have a stronger relationship in the end. Of course, I also like the ending and what it hints at. :-)
I love this chapter I wish they had a similar break up to this in S7 its better than the proposal we got it would have helped clear their issues better and i like the good and bad references to Ross and Rachal that we got.
that was awesome!! im glad they got it together in the end
Ugh, you deserve such an amazing review, and I wish I wasn't sick and I had internet and gotten sleep last night. I at least want to leave you a little brief note, as little sense as it might make. To tell you I absolutely loved it is an understatement. And their last fight? Brilliant. So beautifully written.