This was great. I loved all of it. Paris, Finn and Colin's kidnapping plot, Rory's plan to stand up to Mitchum and reaction to seeing Finn and Colin there, and Mitchum's reaction to all of it.
Can't wait for your next fic
This is so sweet! I love the Colin and Finn bits. I do think Rory probably should've stayed mad longer, but fluff is always appreciated. :)
really cute. LOL u have some great funny lines here. :D
Sooo.... I had it on good authority that this story was going to be wonderful so I was very much looking forward to reading it, and wouldn't you know it? I LOVED it!
This was one of the funniest fics I have read in a long time, and what's even better, is how in character you had everyone. I always hate writing Shira, and am often wary of how other write her, but you did SUCH a good job with both her and Mitchum.
And Paris? Oh my, when I got to the "Kill her?" line, I lost it. I laughed out loud at work (where I shouldn't have been reading this!) and couldn't stop laughing. And then her line "There's a storm coming." I'm still giggling over this!
Oh Colin and Finn... priceless.. especially Finn as Scarlett, I fully believe the dramatics between these two in this scene, as well as the complete horror in which the Huntbergers would react.
And that end scene was absolutely perfect.. such chaos, and written so perfectly... I loved Mitchum's caving, Colin and Finn's high fives.. Rory's confusion.. it was all wonderful.
Of course, this means you should probably write another Gilmore Girls fic. I'm just saying.
Ohhhh, I see what you're doing, lol. Buttering me up to make me write more, eh?
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you found it funny, haha, because I often worry people will hate my humor. You have saved me!
And it's nice to finally speak to you over the internet after hearing so much about you from Katie. :) *waves hello*
that was so cute!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
I envy your ability to capture the essence of all these characters so well and with so few words. And you didn't miss a beat with any of them.
The first exchange between Rory and Logan was adorable. I love that she chose to surprise him rather than be clingy and fill his voicemail ;-).
Paris was my favorite. There just cannot be enough Paris, lol. And again, you totally captured the feel of her character that episode. Wanting to kill Shira, calling Logan a coward, and just overall having Rory's back. Paris was just made of awesome. The guys were, too. Haha, I love that they told Logan they'd get him his woman back without his help.
You are of the few writers that have captured the wit of the characters to perfection. Why you haven't written them before is beyond me, but I hope we can get you to write them again.
*sniff* You make me feel so smushy and wonderful. Thank you so much for your lovely review! I really love all these characters, which might be why I am so reluctant to write them, haha. Don't wanna mess up a good thing...
Once I finally finish the show, though, I promise I'll try writing another one.