what? that's it? UPDATE. Love this story so far, i think you have the bantering/rambling down which is something I don't think i'll ever be able to do. But please update!
Paris' chatter continues on to this chapter. I just can't help but love her and you've portrayed her just the way she is on the show. You've really got a knack for staying true to the characters. Well done.
Everytime I finish a chapter, your endings always make me want to read more. Great segue/segway.
Ooops, other than the double post error, it's another excellent chapter. The arrangement is a nice twist and something I look forward to happening soon. I have to remind myself that this story goes AU quite after YJIJJ ep. You've got Lorelai's machine-gun mouth exactly the way it is. Love it.
Just wanted to let you know that I've been reading this story for a few days now and although I haven't quite finished, I'm loving every chapter of it. You're writing style is very eloquent and almost remind me of the days I used to watch Dawson's Creek and expand my vocabulary. You are a gifted writer. It's been a fun read so far and I will post other reviews every so often. I know how important it is for a writer to get some feedback. :)
You had me at "...nice slippers." What an LOL moment! :D
Nice take on Post "If You Jump, I Jump Jack"
is it over???
Please tell me this isnt the end!!! I have spent the best part of 3 days reading this fic and absolutely love it and i am desperately hoping that the fact it says it is complete is just a mistake as i really want to read more of this amazing fic!!
Love the first chapter a great start to a story I look forward to reading the rest :D
This is among the best written fic stories. You are an amazing writer and captured the spirit of the characters so well. Especially the banter and humor.. I found myself laughing out loud countless times. But, as a lot of people already posted, the story is not quite finished. Please add another chapter or better still, write a sequel for us!!!
Thank you for many fun hours of entertainment and escape.
Update soon please :]]
This deserves a sequel
please make another chapter! the story says "complete"... but it's not! i just NEED to see Rory's reaction to the ily and what happens after that...
Adore doesn't even begin to describe my feelings for this. Its beautifully written, the build up to the relationship is just long enough to make the date seem like a swimming pool in the peak of summer, and you have a supreme grasp of the English language.
Is there more? Can we see it soon? Pretty please?
I just re-read this story for the 3rd time. And I really love it. You are detailed wihtout being overly so. And your writing is really superior. Thank you for sharing this fic with us. I hope that you will write something new for us in the future.
i agree you did leave it really open ended in a way but not realy cause u said he went bach to fantasy land and in an earlier chapeter you refered to his and rory's love like that so it is blantly obvious they end up happy espicially since she said she would forgive him. And i love the roller coaster reference, but top thrill dragster really isn't the hard of a roller coaster to ride i mean it isn't even the tallest or fastest roller coaster, but then again i thing all rollercoasters are a walk in the park cause i'm and ACE member (Americna Coaster Enthusists)
Awesome story! I absolutely love the length and all the detailsand thought you've included. The end, though, left me a little disappointed, or rather how it ended. It's like a little piece is still missing. Nevertheless this is a wonderful piece of writing. :)
One thing I noticed - chapter 49 and 50 hare the same, have the same content.
I loved your story all the way. But please please update ... You can't end the story like that !
Absolutely fabulous story. I love the Rory/Logan parts - PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!!! I need to know what happens next!
I'm enjoying your story so far... :)