I enjoyed reading this.
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This was a very cute story. The Colin/Finn stuff was great. They had their funny elements, but I also liked how Colin discovered all of those little pieces that proved Rory was around. The "Hi Honey, I'm home," bits were cute. And good for Rory standing up to her mother despite possible pain.
so sweet! love the easy rapport between everyone, natural just like it should be. great job!
There are not enough words to express how much I love this story. I love the rapport between Logan, Colin, and Finn. I love the insight into Logan's mind. I adore what you did with the prompt. What I consider a mark of a good story is that I feel for the character. You were able to make me feel Logan's uncomfortableness, his uneasiness, and hurt in the relationship. I love how in character Colin and Logan were. Thank you so much!
Very cute fic! Ah, the misadventures of sending a text to the wrong person. Been there. It usually plays out exactly as this did, so thumbs up there! I love how you portrayed the friendship between Colin and Logan. Also love? How Rory had to get dressed to call her mother. That was a nice added touch. And of course, the last little scene was a great way to tie everything up. Loved it!
That was absolutely lovely. :)
I love how half of the focus on the fic is on RL, and the other half on the guy's friendship. I think you followed the prompt perfectly.
Great story. Funny and cute. And you definitely got the spirit of the prompt.