Loved it!! (:
I think that this is great!! I love it!! And all those moments you picked just had me going 'yes exactly, they should have been kissing there!' So great job :D
I like that you added these "kissing scenes" and although it may be hard to believe that they would kiss on that first scene (Norman Mailer...), I think the last one, they might have. At that point in the season, there was a lot of tension going on between the two and like you, I thought they would really kiss then. Thanks for posting. Got my mind imagining. ;)
Terribly cute! I especially love the first one. I could see it so vividly.
This was totally adorable. I always felt that there was a missing kiss between these two after they jumped. With as much chemistry and attraction radiating from the two, I felt it was much needed, and now you gave it to us. :)
Very cute, I liked it
I thought this was really cute. I agree with you there were many times in season five that would have been perfect for our favorite couples first kiss and I think you portrayed them wonderfully
i think that they all are really cute stories & i would love for you to write a full length story (i didn't like disapproving lorelei though