I love it! It's awesome to see the Huntzberger acknowledging the love Rory and Logan share. And I love that Logan was protecting Rory even if it was just acting as a sheild. I heart even more that their love is making everyone else around them open their eyes to what's going on around them...on ward I go...I'm so excited for this story... I absolutely LOVE that its happening so soon after the season final and that she didn't wait to tell Logan about the baby until after he already found out some how 5 years later on his own or something sigh love it
Hey I'm new to the rory/logan fan fiction world I usually read nick/miley fics but gilmore girls was one of my favorite shows when it was on! I found your story read and loved it its so well written and captures the characters exactly as they would have beeen if the show had continued great work can't wait for the next chapter please update soon! :)
Hi! I am new here but I have to say I really am enjoying your story.I look forward to reading the rest. I have to also say that I'm confused about the chapter 14 and chapter 15. When I pull them up its the same chapter.
That was absolutely wonderful. “Rory, we are facing the end of the Gilmore Girl dynasty, the division of a kingdom if you will.” I thought this line was pure Lorelai Gilmore.
I just love the way you ended the chapter! I'm so excited to read what happens next.
I'm glad they worked out their issues and I like that you also address Rory's fault in the 7.21 debacle that it wasen't just Logan
Please update. The last seen between Rogan just shows you how much love they have for each other. I love the way you express such love and can't wait to read more. . . .
It was well worth it. Mitchum and Shira's reactions felt very real. You captured the emotions of the situation beautifully. Thank you for writing this wonderful story!
I like that you're bringing in more of Shira's point of view. She's so often portrayed as pure villain; it's interesting to get inside her head. I like your story and I hope you keep writing!
i really liked this chapter. it was very well written and well thought out. you added a new dimension to mitchum and shira i hadn't seen before. i liked how you added a possible subplot with them to. logan was really good in this chapter! can't wait till they tell the gilmores!
Amazing chapter! I always love Logan/Mitchum confrontations, especially when Logan actually picks up for himself and Rory. I also like how you were able to make me feel genuinely bad for Mitchum and Shira, despite my extreme dislike for the two of them.
Keep up the good work!!
Awesome story!!! I can't wait for more!
I love it! Please keep updating frequently because this is so good. I always love finding a new story to follow so you have at least one dedicated fannNnnn!
Oh nevermind! I found it! And I was right, there are plenty of reviews there! =D
This is such a great fic! Good Rogans are becoming hard to come by these days. It's nice to have something to look forward to reading again. I can't wait till they tell the Gilmores the news. Good times are to be had I'm sure of it. :P It's really sad the lack of respose this story is getting because it's really great. Have you considered posting it on fanfiction.net? Because I'm sure you would get the response this deserves there. Anyway, please update soon! :)
Very well written chapter. I can only hope that there are more writers like you because we are getting less new Rory and Logan stories and even fewer updates from the good writers. Continue with your great work and please do not stop writing about our favorite couple.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will keep writing for as long as I have good idea's and for as long as people keep reading.