what a great way to end this! you wrote the argument and resolution really well :)
Reviewed this over at FF but I thought it deserved recognition here as well. I'm really glad you came back and finished this. It was so much fun to read and you always have the Gilmorism language down to a T. It's definitely one of your expertise. :D Keep writing!
This is a combination of prior chapters' reviews so here it goes: I can't believe Rory is still so insensitive sometimes or that she's really not ready?! I enjoyed that Emily/Richard/Rory interaction very much. Wonderfully scripted! But then it was ruined again. I'm really looking forward to the happily ever after. Hopefully, you'll get to finish it.
Btw, Shelly reminds me of a Finn/Paris character. Good job with her.
OMFG, was my first thought, but then again, it's Vegas, right? They didn't! She didn't! She could'n't have?! HE couldn't have after that rejection, but then again, it must be Vegas! What an aptly named story...I'm looking forward to clarifying my conflicted mind to the next chapter! Way to start with the fireworks!!!
Good Story....I hope it all works out for them....I always wanted them to be together....Keep up the fantastic work and update soon please
so glad that you updated! i've missed your writing, and this is great! disappointed that logan wasn't there, but nice plot twist having mitchum show up.
can't wait for more ... a reconciliation/nice hawaii trip is in order :)
Love, love, love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Nooooooooo....why on earth do they have to have so many dang problems? Great fic.
I really love this story. Please update soon...
I love this story. You are doing a brilliant job of getting Rory and Logan's voices. I can just imagine their fighting over appropriate use of his influence.
I love this story! Can't wait for more updates.
YAY for the update! i feel how torn rory is - you do a god job of portraying her conflict. i hate the fighting though :(
the surprise trip was so sweet - i hope they get to go!
Thank you thank you thank you thank you for it! It´s real, your characters and whole story. Usually it´s something like: they get together, say I love you and that is it. I´m happy you are realistic:)
So great! I hope you update quicker than last time, I love this story!
great chapter, update soon!
YAY!! i love this fic :D their argument about altruism was so typical, and i love the texts :P rory being so wife-like is cute, but i hope shelly isn't right about forgetting herself.
hope to see more from you soon :)
I'm so glad you updated this! I guess it's going to be more than 5 parts, eh?
great, please update soon!
CONGRATS! This was a great chapter and I loved the reactions of Rory's co-workers and I cannot wiat to see how she and Lorelai will work through Lorelai's dissapointment
Well, I hate them being separate (ok, they are together but.. but!;)) because they always do something wrong (jumping of the cliff, kissing another guy etc.) but one week won´t be so bad I hope;)
And yeah, when Rory doesn´t do what Lorelai thinks is right she acts like Emily, don´t you think? So great job in showing that!!