Wow! I didn't realize how powerful one-shots could be! That was so moving. The best part is the confrontation at the end where Rory admits she was the "runner" and how she resembled her dad. I never even thought about that, but that was very true!!! Way to end it!
this is soo amazing! you did such a wonderful job. soo awesome!
I read it too many times and I still love it, thank you for writing it;)
oh my gosh. that was so intense and bittersweet and the ending just tied it all together. i like the name eli for their son, too :]
I think you should write a sequel