This story is absolutely amazing. It took a very serious tone the moment Honor passed away. It's good though as it made it more dramatic, however, I miss the light, airy, comedic tone from the first few chapters. Nonetheless, everything tied up real nice and the book is a great honorarium to Honor. What a lovely story about like you said, family ties.
omg! what a shocker! what a twist to the plot. that came out of left field. omg. it's a good chapter though, sad, but powerful.
Even though we only had a few moments with Honor, this is exactly how I imagined her to be behind the scenes with Logan. "Oy, Logan" reminds me of Oy with the poodles already! LOL Hmm...who could that visitor be?
Yay, the L word. I knew it was just a matter of time before that came up.
I'm really liking the "childhood" flashbacks. Tristan? He's always around as an aside. Good history though.
Oh man, Logan's really having a tough day, huh. Poor thing. ILY already!!! :D
I like the title of this chapter. Uh-oh, Colin knowing? That may not be a bad thing. I think Steph should know too. lol
Oooh, that was on fire!
You are just waaaay too hilarious! The tree metaphor, an LOL moment for me.
"He stiffened up, in more ways than one." How do you come up with these amazing lines? And the ending there? I hope he didn't!!!???!!!
What I love about this chapter:
Say this 5x: Vera-freaking-Wang!
Steph saying: Embrace the perkiness!
Tension, tension, ten-freaking-sion! Love it! :D
Like the visual image of "This is your brain...." as an egg. LOL This is a pretty fun chapter to read. I like that you incorporated the Amazing Race!
Ooooh, sounds juicy! Can't wait for the next chapters.
aww I just adore it! :D soo much!
damn you Logan! I so love it! great job on the fic Lauren!
Awww I so love it ♥ and I love that it's from his POV and please Logan be my friend!
hi this isnt really a review - more of an encouraging comment.. this was really good. =] i cried!! i think you really captured their personalities well. It was really creative and original. I was practically bawling when Honor died!! Good Job! XOX
omg im crying its such a great story and i love the happy ending *sob* your a great writer
wow that was amazing! very well written. he was freaking out i loved that.
he's thinking about baseball lmao Poor Logan!
his girl parts :lmao: OMG that cracked me up and protective Logan is soo much fun to read!
awww they are so cute and that whole thing about the knitting lessons was hillarious I had forgotten about it!