I love Finn, so much! *g* I can't believe I forgot about this story for so long!
Love love love this
omg! i want to write a long well deserved review but im afraid i can't wait to click that next button! lol
oooh i can't wait to read more! i know u didn't want to drop the bomb yet but really, we all needed that bomb to be dropped. i just can't wait for it to explode!!! ;)
that's got to be the funniest thing chris' character had ever said on the show or fic. u r a genius! u truly r! < is that so? TRUTH! ;)
i def saw fireworks after reading this chapter!
i love how this chapter began. with how rory had redefined his world since they'd first met...and yes, more kisses! lol
not only was this chapter so cute and fluffy (the baby endearment) like my dog's tail, ;) it had DRAMA! love the "i've seen friendlier expressions on pit bulls," luke's "jesus!...astronauts have seen it," lorelai's "...throw a sock on the door..." to "everything in SH is a spectator event" moment. wow, this is one hell of a chapter! my fave so far!
yay, first kiss! i def want to read more of those! :D
this is how a writer does gilmorism. this fic absolutely reek of ASP-ism. i adore it!
oh man, what a punch line! the best kind! this is much more enjoyable than i thought...
awww cute ch, the effect of chemistry and physical contact
pretty interesting spin, want to read more about where u'll take this
I absolutely ADORE this fic!
Ohman...I'm loving this story, I can't believe it's not finished! I need to know the plan!
Laugh Out Loud
please keep going and update
Do you plan on finishing this story? It is beautifully written. I hope we get a chance to see what happens next.
i've read all 10 chapters over the last two days and i'm terribly sad that that's all there is, so far. I hope you do update because this is brilliant. It's funny, quirky and everyone is in character and the storyline works. I love this.
Amazing story so far. Your writing is fantastic. Please update soon!! =]
A very well written story. Please do not abandon this wonderful story... update please.