Flows good and sounds like them. Its quick and to the point not to much deteal I like it.
Hukuna Matata it is a wandrfull frize:]
nice episode Lorolie shuld be prued thet her 22 year old daughter can give her relationsihp edvase..
I enjoyed how you told this story and in my humble opinion you stayed true to the characters. It is how I imagined how the actual series would have gone if they had not messed up Series 7.
It was well done and gave me warm fuzzy feelings in the right places, good stuff.
i like it the ending was every diffrent you could totally continue this story it's great. Please write more.
Great story. What story are the reporting on in Antartica?
awww I just adore his proposal. great job on the fic.
Please write a sequal, please...