Felt like a quickie one-shot, no pun intended. Another good gone!
Oooh, the Master and Commander is back. Cute sequel. Very enjoyable.
Awww...little AJ. Love this story.
Very well written. Off the read the next ones. :)
really well written and in character, love it :) please update! if only this had really happened.. *sigh*...
I like it! Good story and I like how you linked Lorelai's and Rory's cravings!
i liked it please update soon.
"it's not enough time" it breaks my bangel shipping heart :P. I love this! you did a wonderful job
“Fine, you can get a stethoscope, but I draw the line at getting our own sonogram machine.” good call. “You’ll take the private jet, and I’m coming with you…and I’m going to make sure there’s a doctor on board in case something goes wrong.” aww, to be overprotective (rightly) with money. “We have a 12:30 appointment with Dr. Warner. She’s the second best OB-GYN in London.” of course. he is amazing. great job. really.
Please make another chapter! I've been dying for something entertaining to read and I've finally found it! I know you're busy with LAWKI but pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
Very good, reminds me of a story I read on fanfiction once, keep the stories going
So glad that Illusive is back along with one of my favorite stories. Great story telling!
So sweet...absolutely loved it...it would be fantastic if you continued with a few more chapters about Rory's pregnancy and then the birth!
Hey good story, but just one quick criticism. You can't hear baby's heart beat with a stethescope. Only thing you'd get is some gurgly bowel sounds. They could get a little hand held doppler unit that you use gel and a little wand to hear the baby's heart beat.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks fot the review. I actually knew you can't hear the baby's heart beat with a stethoscope but I figured they wouldn't know that and it would be a cute thing for him to think of doing. Anyhow, I'm glad you liked the story other wise :)
As always - great fic!
this part had me cracking up:
“Hmm, well what if this Dr. Warner is a lesbian? Would you have a problem with that?”
Logan stopped what he was doing on the computer and turned to her with a smirk.
“Eww, Logan. Stop picturing the lesbian doctor between my legs. Pig,” she said huffily, but followed it up with a laugh.
and logan in "list mode" was hilarious :)
I absolutly love your stories. I am very much looking forward to updates to this one, the first chapter was fantastic.
awe that's so cute. i love that logan's turned into the over protective daddy. update again soon!!
PLease update soon! I totally love this story and want a whole series on it!